I made it to about chapter 9 before I skipped ahead to see if the story was done. This is not, as the recommendation claims, written on a professional level. For one thing, in the beginning chapters at least, the author doesn't seem aware of the difference between "their" and "there." In addition, there is too much use of the passive voice. The sentence structure at times is also awkward.
An interesting concept, to be sure, and maybe I'll eventually finish the fic. But for now, the writing is simply too much of a turn-off.