Okay, perhaps the plot of this story is amazing. I wouldn't know—I simply couldn't get past the terrible writing. Way too much passive voice and "as you know, bob" dialogue and telling language meant I couldn't get into the story at all. The prologue was intriguing, but the chapters that followed made me quickly give up. And I skipped around enough to know that the writing quality never gets better. Perhaps worth a read if you can get past this sort of thing, but I can't.
Badly written
Okay, perhaps the plot of this story is amazing. I wouldn't know—I simply couldn't get past the terrible writing. Way too much passive voice and "as you know, bob" dialogue and telling language meant I couldn't get into the story at all. The prologue was intriguing, but the chapters that followed made me quickly give up. And I skipped around enough to know that the writing quality never gets better. Perhaps worth a read if you can get past this sort of thing, but I can't.