The writing and plot as a whole are stable and entirely fine and are quiet fun to read most of the issues for me come from a couple of odd moments and some things that should be there but are missing including big mac being a karma Houdini after smacking someone while I can understand this is a play on how a woman can smack a man and nothing happens unless it's the other way around but just puting it there does not really lambast it to parody something you have to actually to parody it not just leave it there and something's are left and are just handwaved away like the reason no one talks being that they are being shut down we are told this instead of shown all in all the story is solid and mostly fun but a couple of choice moments can be pretty stupid
Fanfic Over all okay but a couple of problems
The writing and plot as a whole are stable and entirely fine and are quiet fun to read most of the issues for me come from a couple of odd moments and some things that should be there but are missing including big mac being a karma Houdini after smacking someone while I can understand this is a play on how a woman can smack a man and nothing happens unless it's the other way around but just puting it there does not really lambast it to parody something you have to actually to parody it not just leave it there and something's are left and are just handwaved away like the reason no one talks being that they are being shut down we are told this instead of shown all in all the story is solid and mostly fun but a couple of choice moments can be pretty stupid