This fic is fascinating in many ways, not least of which is its wacky sense of humor. It features an at-times-very-indecorous Celestia and Luna. (Luna's desire for alicorn stallions is just the beginning), a surprisingly low OC cast, and some interesting takes on canon events—the Wonderbolt's curious ineptitude, all the stallion guards,and Rainbow's level of skill. The explanation of Pinkie's abilities is especially compelling.
At the same time, this reviewer is concerned about the sheer scope of the story. At sixteen chapters, the story is literally JUST getting started, with the Mane 6 JUST embarking on their grand quest. The premise was set up in the first two chapters, and it's taken over thirteen chapters to finally get it started. It's hard to think of any of the space as wasted—this is a wide-sweeping fic with approximately six separate plots—but at the same time it's worrying. Only time will tell how well this fic can bear up under the weight of its own ambition.
FanFic Amusing, but Ambitious
This fic is fascinating in many ways, not least of which is its wacky sense of humor. It features an at-times-very-indecorous Celestia and Luna. (Luna's desire for alicorn stallions is just the beginning), a surprisingly low OC cast, and some interesting takes on canon events—the Wonderbolt's curious ineptitude, all the stallion guards,and Rainbow's level of skill. The explanation of Pinkie's abilities is especially compelling.
At the same time, this reviewer is concerned about the sheer scope of the story. At sixteen chapters, the story is literally JUST getting started, with the Mane 6 JUST embarking on their grand quest. The premise was set up in the first two chapters, and it's taken over thirteen chapters to finally get it started. It's hard to think of any of the space as wasted—this is a wide-sweeping fic with approximately six separate plots—but at the same time it's worrying. Only time will tell how well this fic can bear up under the weight of its own ambition.