Reviews: I'm speechless

I'm speechless

If you aren't grossed out by certain things, you will love this. I don't understand why people hate this story so much, after all there are a crapload of stories like this in AFF.net and similar sites. Like Impse, this was meant to be a satire of horribly written anatomically incorrect sex fanfiction with pervasive severe biology fail. A fanfiction classic.
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