A pretty good read.
is kinda like a good topping. You just want to try a little bit of it on everything. So we've got it on My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic
. How well do they go together? Good for the most part, but it might depend if you've got a preference one way or the other.
The fic has a number of good points to it, mainly in characterization. Chell and Derpy's personalities work well for their established characters without really contradicting canon too much, the new take on G La DOS
is suitably threatening and no one suffers from any major Flanderization
. The introduction of Portal elements into Equestria is at least within the realm of plausibility as well. The build-up and final conflict are also handled pretty well and make for a good action scene.
The downside, as mentioned before, is mostly how much you like your pony-to-Portal ratio. While it makes sense the final bits, set within Aperture Science, would focus on more on the Portal cast, the other ponies get pushed to the side fairly quickly, with more of their activities happening off-screen and their not even participating in the final fight. This may have been for pacing or simple lack of ideas on how to make it exciting, but it does undermine their role in the story at the end.
In the end, though, if you don't mind a little more Chell and GLaDOS focus at the end, you'll probably enjoy this story for the most part. It's written well and a solid read overall.