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Carolinae Since: Nov, -0001
05/04/2013 11:36:06 •••

Just a copy of the original story

When I first saw this story, I was surprised by the number of reviews and I raised a high expectation. But dont be fooled by the overdramatic community, this stuff was just the original story where the author changed Saito into a Gary Stu

Trust me, if you enjoyed the original series, then you wouldnt like this.

1. It showed no decent character development, its just an overly perfect Emiya Shirou being surrounded by girls whom he has no interest with

2. All the characters that you know and loved was practically off.

3. It is so full of detail its aready a giant eyesore. Its like the author does not trust the readers imagination and decided to talk about every single unnecessary detail

4. The ending was axed. The ending was an embarrassing excuse to say that he cannot continue the story without anything else to copy.

Dont be intrique, this review is meant to kept you away from wasting your life. You had been warned.


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