I agree. I think the multiple power-ups went against the entire point of Teana's Character Development in the issue in question, which was learning to use what she had most effectively. I find it annoying when Fix Fic authors make changes that prevent the characters from learning the lessons they did in canon.
thank you for your comment. you misunderstand what I said. that was my fault for not say what I meant clearly. what I meant by power levels is that the author has a bad habit of idolizing Naruto the best example i can think would be it was stated some were the a six tailed Naruto could beat the leader of MLP (I cant tipe her name at the moment) who as far as I know is the equivalent of a goddess.I do agree with your point however.
Princess Celestia?
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What happens when you write fix fic a bad one at that.
Note this is an update of a review that I posted some time ago that I felt was substandard.
Teanas travel to me is a fix fic and a bad one at that. let's start with power. Characters are given power ups for no justifiably reason the best example would be that Teana has as a Sharingan the author attempt to justify it but contradicts canon witch latter on becomes Mangekyō. Kaede Fuyuo somehow has the Dead Bone Pulse blood line for no reason and several characters are Jinchūriki again no reason and not justified. There are more cases like this but you should get the point. Teana comes off as a Mary sue. The first example would be she found a forerunner ship on a planet that it has no right to be on.
The second is her reaction when the ship in question performs several modifications on her body similar to what you would find in HALO it also given her an extra bust size for no reason other than the pointless fanservices. The author has demonstrated no knowledge on military law and elevates the UNSC to a group of sues to.
That is all I am willing to say for now the longer I type the more grammar errors I make. I do at least recommend you read it only to make your own opinion.