This story is excellent, although it should be noted that this is not a comedic fic. Not that I'm complaining, since it's easily the best fanfic I've ever read. In particular, the characters are all portrayed extremely well, especially Rin, who happens to be the second fictional character ever that I've truly cared about. My only complaint so far is the unambiguous evil of Ex-Rumia, especially since without her there'd be no true 'bad guy' in the story. It's clear who the protagonists are, but aside from Ex-Rumia, there's no clear villian (although Yukari's starting to come close), but even that works all right, and I have no other complaints. I highly recommend this fic; just don't go in expecting much lighthearted fun.
GuyYouMetOnline's review
This story is excellent, although it should be noted that this is not a comedic fic. Not that I'm complaining, since it's easily the best fanfic I've ever read. In particular, the characters are all portrayed extremely well, especially Rin, who happens to be the second fictional character ever that I've truly cared about. My only complaint so far is the unambiguous evil of Ex-Rumia, especially since without her there'd be no true 'bad guy' in the story. It's clear who the protagonists are, but aside from Ex-Rumia, there's no clear villian (although Yukari's starting to come close), but even that works all right, and I have no other complaints. I highly recommend this fic; just don't go in expecting much lighthearted fun.