Reviews Comments: captchacritter
You guys really aren't serious about this one, are you? It smacks of OOC and disregard for the setting and wish fulfillment without capably handling its own so-called "brand of insanity." Its one thing to bend canon in order to tell a better story or play fast and loose with it - it's another thing entirely to disregard it completely in favor of RULE OF COOL. Guy had to give Marty Stu-Shirou 4 Sabers, one who is another servant entirely instead of being different aspect of the same servant like the other three, and make orgasmic cooking( I don't care if he keeps saying it's an omake, the fact is that it used to be a /real chapter/, and that's enough for me to know that the author is whimsical enough to write things like this and consider it serious), and a pointless OC who teaches Shirou magecraft that he shouldn't even be able to learn period. It's basically like one of those terrible Naruto fics where the Naruto gets a power up after being taught by a mysterious OC whose past we don't know of and is basically just an excuse to make him stronger.
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