While this is technically well written and the author is clearly above average for a fan fiction writer, calling this an actual Nasuverse fanfic is correct only in the sense that it uses the trappings of the Nasuverse to alter Sekirei. If you are looking for something that includes the actual themes and underlying concepts of the Nasuverse, including the creeping sense of horror as the truth is revealed, this is not for you. The characterization of Shirou could also be challenged. All in all, this comes off more as a darker version of Sekirei with a "cooler" protagonist instead of a genuine crossover. The latest build-up suggests that this might change, but it is dubious if this will succeed. Summing up, your mileage might vary.
By Usandru
While this is technically well written and the author is clearly above average for a fan fiction writer, calling this an actual Nasuverse fanfic is correct only in the sense that it uses the trappings of the Nasuverse to alter Sekirei. If you are looking for something that includes the actual themes and underlying concepts of the Nasuverse, including the creeping sense of horror as the truth is revealed, this is not for you. The characterization of Shirou could also be challenged. All in all, this comes off more as a darker version of Sekirei with a "cooler" protagonist instead of a genuine crossover. The latest build-up suggests that this might change, but it is dubious if this will succeed. Summing up, your mileage might vary.