lu127
Since: Sep, 2011
11/05/2012 00:00:00
Comment by Tropers/awakenDeepBlue:
I'll have to agree with Sneebs, the formatting is terrible. Also, IMHO, I don't really find this fic to be well written.
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By Sneebs
I'd probably enjoy this a lot more if the writer could learn how to edit properly. Using a symbol like "..." should not be the way to say the scene has changes. Damnabbit, I might actually be enjoying this if I knew the difference between a scene change and a character being dumbfounded by the comic relief.