This story is great and probably the best retelling of the game, ever. It brings to light many questions that the game slid over or never really address. I also rank her characterization of Lloyd and Colette as being one the best. she perfectly pulls off Colette being an airhead without making her stupid unlike some fanfics. Although, there are something that are needlessly long or drawn out like all the Seal Temples and the traveling between cities. Her version of Raine and especially Kratos are also hit or miss. Honestly, how much you like her version of Kratos will make or break this story for people because he's quite different from the game, manga, or even the OVA.
By Ramona122003
This story is great and probably the best retelling of the game, ever. It brings to light many questions that the game slid over or never really address. I also rank her characterization of Lloyd and Colette as being one the best. she perfectly pulls off Colette being an airhead without making her stupid unlike some fanfics. Although, there are something that are needlessly long or drawn out like all the Seal Temples and the traveling between cities. Her version of Raine and especially Kratos are also hit or miss. Honestly, how much you like her version of Kratos will make or break this story for people because he's quite different from the game, manga, or even the OVA.