I have never seen anything more pointless than this. An entire chapter is dedicated to cooking, the canon personalities of the entire cast have been mangled into stupid Middle Schoolers, two author sues are added in for no reason, unfunny jokes, the fourth wall being broken so much it stops being funny, Getting Chell and the morality core out of character, and too many things to name off the top of my head. I can't believe I wasted my time to read a concept that could have done better with another author. I advise you not to read it unless you're a masochist.
POINTLESS
I have never seen anything more pointless than this. An entire chapter is dedicated to cooking, the canon personalities of the entire cast have been mangled into stupid Middle Schoolers, two author sues are added in for no reason, unfunny jokes, the fourth wall being broken so much it stops being funny, Getting Chell and the morality core out of character, and too many things to name off the top of my head. I can't believe I wasted my time to read a concept that could have done better with another author. I advise you not to read it unless you're a masochist.