Okay, total disclosure here: I don't really play TF2. I know of it, but I don't have that much hands on experience with it. And I am a brony. THAT BEING SAID, I enjoyed reading this fic. I personally find the BL Us enjoyably sadistic, although Engenier and Demoman get a lot of screen time. Pyro is also enjoyable (whom is declared female here): the firebug we all know who scares her own team, but secretly in distress. the t
As for the MLP:FiM cast, I must agree with some of the other reviews: They start out useless, but they do get their time to shine. But the fic has the BLUs in their world, so it makes more scene to me for it to focus on the dimensional strangers than the natives.
However, there is something missing. I can't put my finger on it, but something is.
The chapters are pretty long, that's a plus, and the characterization is usually strong though sometimes takes a hit. The humor though far and few between usually makes me laugh out loud. Overall, I like this and it should get it's own page.
It's pretty good but missing something....
Okay, total disclosure here: I don't really play TF2. I know of it, but I don't have that much hands on experience with it. And I am a brony. THAT BEING SAID, I enjoyed reading this fic. I personally find the BL Us enjoyably sadistic, although Engenier and Demoman get a lot of screen time. Pyro is also enjoyable (whom is declared female here): the firebug we all know who scares her own team, but secretly in distress. the t
As for the MLP:FiM cast, I must agree with some of the other reviews: They start out useless, but they do get their time to shine. But the fic has the BLUs in their world, so it makes more scene to me for it to focus on the dimensional strangers than the natives.
However, there is something missing. I can't put my finger on it, but something is.
The chapters are pretty long, that's a plus, and the characterization is usually strong though sometimes takes a hit. The humor though far and few between usually makes me laugh out loud. Overall, I like this and it should get it's own page.