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VeryMelon Since: Jul, 2011
07/11/2014 16:27:45 •••

Waste of Time.

Personally thought that the story was unbearable from the start with just generally bad writing. The fact that around 80 percent of the edits and tropes added on the actual page on the site was made by the author doesn't speak well of it either, especially considering that many of them like the BadAss and it's various subtypes are incredibly opinionated. I also found Minato Arisoto too irritating to care about him, not because he is so strong(and really, he's a video game character, so that's a pointless complaint to have at all), but I just never saw the point of making him British, making all of this Englishman humor annoying. I loathe Yukari in every sense of the word, so I ignored the ship. However, I greatly enjoyed this incarnation of Ken, and no longer found him a brat. The fact that Sam Jaz was willing to explain how gameplay mechanics worked in-universe was also a nice plus for me. The biggest praise I will give this fic is the sheer amount of Continuity Porn shown by meeting the Persona 1 , Persona 2, and Persona 4 cast; as well as meeting THE Lucifer from the main timeline.. Having said that, I would never recommend this fic to anyone.

Bookyangel2438 Since: Jul, 2011
06/05/2013 00:00:00

Generally my feelings on this fic, although with slight differences. Minato is an obnoxious Mary Sue, no one talks like in this fic at all, the references are poorly researched and inaccurate (SMT 1 hero being the guardian of Hell; Tatsuya and Maya seeing each other despite EP), and the writing is mediocre and forgettable. Overall, I agree with this review, and wouldn't recommend this fic to anyone.

Alt account of Angeldog 2437.
Thenextgamer Since: Dec, 2013
07/11/2014 00:00:00

Eh, opinions. I like this fic. I guess it's because it's the first fanfic I read after finishing persona 3 fes.


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