As a longtime fan of Ranma 1/2 fanfiction, I ended up reading this one a long time ago.
I do, unfortunately take issue with some parts of it. Particularly, of course, the fact that this is a very generic premise:
One day, Ranma has had enough, snaps, tells the entire cast (more-or-less) to go and get bent, and then goes on with his life.
Allowing Akane, and Akane alone, back into his life.
Okay. So, Takahashi herself wasn't a genius at handling that, but it does irk me when fanfiction authors present things like this in a way that's supposed to be 'fair,' and it does bug me that Shampoo, Ukyou, and Kodachi aren't given a chance — at all. That's ... par for the course for C Jones, though.
This story, unlike most of his others, manages to be enjoyable with a few moments of annoying favoritism. So for the mostpart, enjoyable, if a bit generic.
Good delivery of a very tired premise?
As a longtime fan of Ranma 1/2 fanfiction, I ended up reading this one a long time ago.
I do, unfortunately take issue with some parts of it. Particularly, of course, the fact that this is a very generic premise:
One day, Ranma has had enough, snaps, tells the entire cast (more-or-less) to go and get bent, and then goes on with his life.
Allowing Akane, and Akane alone, back into his life.
Okay. So, Takahashi herself wasn't a genius at handling that, but it does irk me when fanfiction authors present things like this in a way that's supposed to be 'fair,' and it does bug me that Shampoo, Ukyou, and Kodachi aren't given a chance — at all. That's ... par for the course for C Jones, though.
This story, unlike most of his others, manages to be enjoyable with a few moments of annoying favoritism. So for the mostpart, enjoyable, if a bit generic.