PrinnyRamza
Since: Jan, 2001
08/15/2018 00:00:00
Looking back I do agree with a lot of what I said even if I said it with as many spelling errors as possible, but I do have to revise some things.
For one the harem is not bad, but it\'s still a harem. It\'s weird at points but it\'s good despite that. Further Naruto\'s growth was a little rushes. Basically it was pointed out that the way he fought was dumb and that\'s about it. That allows him gain a bunch of levels in maturity and badass.
I still like the story. Probably one of the better Naruto fics and I think it revise Marvel\'s famous but controversial Civil War pretty well while combining it with the Naruto elements nicely.
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I had a fun time reading through this. Naruto is a little powered down at first but this is intensional in order to keep the story balanced. So instead of super hero, Naruto's stats are merely somewhere just below peak human. He still kicks ass. I mean it. Crowning Moment of Awesome: The 2nd to last chapter, once you read it you will agree.
Its not funny but its entertaining and I read it straight without really being able to stop myself. The action is great, the fights scene are really fun to read, being so well written.
Its a Naruto/Harem (consisting of X-23, Butterfly and Mercury) but its not a badly written as most all. Most have random woman just falling in love left and right. The relations, for the most part develop pretty realistically and according to their personas. Like i love how Layla just knows that she already likes Naruto because well.... "she knows stuff".
It also has Deadpool in it, you really can't go wrong there.
So good action, characters are written well and it better reading this than the actual Civil War comics. So check it out.