It's.... pretty bad. Like My Immortal kind of bad, just with fewer grammatical errors. Characters are way off the mark, especially Orihime, the oblique time period references and cultural implications are indicative of a Western high school setting, and the overall plot is just petty and unimaginative. If you're in the mood to laugh at a failed fic, this would be the one for you. Otherwise, steer clear for fear of losing precious brain cells in the process of reading this travesty.
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It's.... pretty bad. Like My Immortal kind of bad, just with fewer grammatical errors. Characters are way off the mark, especially Orihime, the oblique time period references and cultural implications are indicative of a Western high school setting, and the overall plot is just petty and unimaginative. If you're in the mood to laugh at a failed fic, this would be the one for you. Otherwise, steer clear for fear of losing precious brain cells in the process of reading this travesty.