Apart from ALOT of Orihime bashing at the start of the story which basically portrays her as a whore, the story is excellent and shows the feelings of the two main characters alot so that you can what they're thinking rather than getting straight down to the sex.
Random Passer By's review
Apart from ALOT of Orihime bashing at the start of the story which basically portrays her as a whore, the story is excellent and shows the feelings of the two main characters alot so that you can what they're thinking rather than getting straight down to the sex.