Reviews Comments: Another typical Kid/OC fic
Another typical Kid/OC fic
The fic begins by piling OC upon OC on the reader, with each barely earning one line's description before you are expected to remember who they are. The main OC is dull, her personality seeming mainly to consist of bitching about everyone around her. While the whole personification concept is interesting, it isn't explored at all and any links to actualy Soul Eater canon are tenuous at best. The author also has the irritating habit of inserting Author's Notes into the middle of the fic, and constantly demands reviews before she'll continue writing. Do not read.
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