Once again, Master Ghandalf delivers an excellent Avatar fic with everyone well-characterized and very unpredictable storytelling. Both sides of the story are written very well, but special mention goes to Iroh's battlefield strategies: his skill is portrayed by actually making him smart, rather than the common writer's trap of making such a character seem smart by setting him against a bunch of idiots.
Ryan Lohner's review
Once again, Master Ghandalf delivers an excellent Avatar fic with everyone well-characterized and very unpredictable storytelling. Both sides of the story are written very well, but special mention goes to Iroh's battlefield strategies: his skill is portrayed by actually making him smart, rather than the common writer's trap of making such a character seem smart by setting him against a bunch of idiots.