I like this story. It is almost surgically bereft of fanon, very much keeps the chaotic but mostly innocent and compassionate tone of the source material, including somehow keeping all of the body-hopping away from turning more adult-themed, the increasing amounts of pure confusion and misunderstandings gradually turn funnier, the writer actually reads as sympathetic, and due to all of the above qualities the story is actually very relaxing to read. Of course as is often the case when a writer tries to get a grip on the characters, it starts kind of weak and takes quite a while to build up enough silliness to turn entertaining, but from around "Shampoo want what honored ancestors were smoking when they wrote laws" and onwards it is quite enjoyable.
antvasima's review
I like this story. It is almost surgically bereft of fanon, very much keeps the chaotic but mostly innocent and compassionate tone of the source material, including somehow keeping all of the body-hopping away from turning more adult-themed, the increasing amounts of pure confusion and misunderstandings gradually turn funnier, the writer actually reads as sympathetic, and due to all of the above qualities the story is actually very relaxing to read. Of course as is often the case when a writer tries to get a grip on the characters, it starts kind of weak and takes quite a while to build up enough silliness to turn entertaining, but from around "Shampoo want what honored ancestors were smoking when they wrote laws" and onwards it is quite enjoyable.