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dualshock71's review
Okay, this one was being optimistic in his original review. It has plot holes. In fact, he's forced to re-write bits of it thanks to a serious case of "Dear God, what the Hell?" And spelling is still a problem. And this is all in the first chapter.

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Crazael: Never said it was the greatest thing out there, only that it's more plausible than most nonstandard pairing fics. As well as having, for its faults in spelling and grammar, excellent characterizations.
comment #5046 Willbyr 5th Nov 10

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