The usual self-insert problems: improbable skills, obvious Marty Stu-ish-ness, etc. It follows the same basic premise as the normal SI fic, but delivers it pretty badly b/c the author gets too wrapped up in describing himself to spend much time on any other character.
Bleh...
The usual self-insert problems: improbable skills, obvious Marty Stu-ish-ness, etc. It follows the same basic premise as the normal SI fic, but delivers it pretty badly b/c the author gets too wrapped up in describing himself to spend much time on any other character.