Valiona
Since: Mar, 2011
04/17/2019 00:00:00
I have two suggestions. First, it might be helpful to give your review a title, so people can more easily access it on the Reviews Activity page, and as a way of summarizing your review. Second, you could probably make your review a little longer and go into a bit more detail about what type of story it is, as well as explain your points a bit more, since you aren\'t anywhere near the character limit.
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This story is beautifully written. It's also strange though; Draco has a sister and you might think his love for her would change his and/or his family's morality, but the Malfoys are the same criminals and murderers(or worse)than they are in canon.