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Willbyr Hi (Y2K)
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10/29/2023 19:51:51 •••

unsigned review

I always liked it for one reason, one that a lot of people miss: It's essentially Shinji And Warhammer 40 K before it was a gleam in Charles Bepin's eye. It downplays Eyrie Production Unlimited's self-insertion antics to insert a snarky, kick-ass action hero into Evangelion's damned colon, giving EVERY NAMED CHARACTER IN THE SERIES A CROWNING MOMENT OF AWESOME. Yes, even freaking Gendo. If you like Shinji And Warhammer 40 K and don't like this, you're a damned member of the Hate Dom and should just freaking admit it. The writing is exquisite, and even though Shinji is initially replaced, he gets an in-character development which provides fulfillment for the fans. To say it gets a lot better after the first few chapters is an understatement.

Willbyr (Y2K)
10/29/2010 00:00:00

Shay Guy: Comparison contested as the initial setup of S&WH40k is a for-want-of-a-nail story that pushes the canon's protagonist onto a different path and illustrates, step by step, how he develops from there. NXE is much more in-your-face about its changes from sentence one, said changes are different kinds of changes, and...well, Bhepin never gave Shinji lines like "I mean, granted, I -am- the world's most handsome and sophisticated fourteen-year-old boy, but what good is that to NERV?" It's perfectly legitimate to like one and not the other.

Ender001 Since: May, 2017
10/29/2023 00:00:00

To me NEE feels... mid. Like, aggressively so.

It feels like it really loses track of where its going halfway throughout and manages to stay coherent through only a heroic effort of sticking to a scriptline. A lot of the pacing especially for the actual angel combat is....

Why????

It just *feels* off.

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