This here's a pretty unique plot executed in a pretty neat way. Only issue I had is that the dialogue seemed a bit... off, to me sometimes.
The story itself is good, a nice, relatively short (25k words) comedy.
Now, 2 of the other reviews down there are talking about some chapter 5. I read this on Fanfiction.net 3 years after those reviews were written, so I think that chapter got removed, because the current chapter 5 fits nicely with the comedy aspect and isn't out of place at all. I didn't skip anything and it was good all the same.
Very creative story
This here's a pretty unique plot executed in a pretty neat way. Only issue I had is that the dialogue seemed a bit... off, to me sometimes.
The story itself is good, a nice, relatively short (25k words) comedy.
Now, 2 of the other reviews down there are talking about some chapter 5. I read this on Fanfiction.net 3 years after those reviews were written, so I think that chapter got removed, because the current chapter 5 fits nicely with the comedy aspect and isn't out of place at all. I didn't skip anything and it was good all the same.