It's...a little wonky. As stated in other reviews below, it really does kind of feel like a "Look how awesome and OP Ichigo is" fic. May I remind you that while yes, Bleach characters are dead souls with immense power, they are still human souls subject to certain rules? The fact that Rider feels super overshadowed is...quite unrealistic. Heroic Spirits are humans so fucking badass they break out of the cycle of reincarnation itself— and in the Nasuverse we have goddamn True Ancestors and Servants throwing around attacks on power scales more skewed than you can shake a stick at. Bleach Shinigami are beholden to gods; Heroic Spirits, under the right circumstances, can kill them.
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It's...a little wonky. As stated in other reviews below, it really does kind of feel like a "Look how awesome and OP Ichigo is" fic. May I remind you that while yes, Bleach characters are dead souls with immense power, they are still human souls subject to certain rules? The fact that Rider feels super overshadowed is...quite unrealistic. Heroic Spirits are humans so fucking badass they break out of the cycle of reincarnation itself— and in the Nasuverse we have goddamn True Ancestors and Servants throwing around attacks on power scales more skewed than you can shake a stick at. Bleach Shinigami are beholden to gods; Heroic Spirits, under the right circumstances, can kill them.