The problem you ask? The writing itself. The entire fic is like something a 3rd grader might type up. Either that, or the author barely understands english.
For instance, here is an actual sentence. "If he had fought him seriously he'd be dead within seconds against that guy as nothing but badness came from him" Or another good one. "Damn it!" Kankuro said in his thoughts.
Yeah...and it gets worse. So unless you can stomach writing that a 10 year old might punch up, I'd suggest giving this a skip.
Interesting idea, but there is one problem.
The problem you ask? The writing itself. The entire fic is like something a 3rd grader might type up. Either that, or the author barely understands english.
For instance, here is an actual sentence. "If he had fought him seriously he'd be dead within seconds against that guy as nothing but badness came from him" Or another good one. "Damn it!" Kankuro said in his thoughts.
Yeah...and it gets worse. So unless you can stomach writing that a 10 year old might punch up, I'd suggest giving this a skip.