There are a few things that bothered me about this story besides the obvious errors that others have pointed out. I haven't finished reading yet and I'll agree that with a decent beta reader it could be brought up to standard by Gods there are things that could be solved so easily by googling something that it drives me crazy. For example; "Summerset" being in Wales. 1) It's Somerset and 2) it's not in Wales. Also Luna (Then Diana, then Jane) being possessed by Rhiannon's daughter; I haven't read much Welsh mythology in a while but I don't recall Rhiannon having a daughter. A son, yes. It seems more to me like the author avoids things that might cause a complication in the story regardless of the truth.
It was ok but...
There are a few things that bothered me about this story besides the obvious errors that others have pointed out. I haven't finished reading yet and I'll agree that with a decent beta reader it could be brought up to standard by Gods there are things that could be solved so easily by googling something that it drives me crazy. For example; "Summerset" being in Wales. 1) It's Somerset and 2) it's not in Wales. Also Luna (Then Diana, then Jane) being possessed by Rhiannon's daughter; I haven't read much Welsh mythology in a while but I don't recall Rhiannon having a daughter. A son, yes. It seems more to me like the author avoids things that might cause a complication in the story regardless of the truth.