I wish I could say something nice about this story. I really do. It has decent grammar, but otherwise it's pretty much everything wrong with all the other Artemis/Holly stories out there. And it's frankly disappointing, that this should be one of the top-reviewed AF fics out there. I suppose, compared to the competition...
Nope.
I wish I could say something nice about this story. I really do. It has decent grammar, but otherwise it's pretty much everything wrong with all the other Artemis/Holly stories out there. And it's frankly disappointing, that this should be one of the top-reviewed AF fics out there. I suppose, compared to the competition...