I actually have read both versions, and recommend the All-Ages version for the better translation. Moving along...
This is quite possibly the best doujin in existence. The characters are spot on, only getting out of character when justified. The plot is amazing and well thought out with a major twist that will catch people off guard. And the best part? It feels like Evangelion. This does not feel like some cheep fanfiction knockoff. No, if they animated this and said it was the true ending, I would believe it.
Overall, if you want a great story (Especially if you like Shinji x Asuka), then read this now.
Amazing
I actually have read both versions, and recommend the All-Ages version for the better translation. Moving along...
This is quite possibly the best doujin in existence. The characters are spot on, only getting out of character when justified. The plot is amazing and well thought out with a major twist that will catch people off guard. And the best part? It feels like Evangelion. This does not feel like some cheep fanfiction knockoff. No, if they animated this and said it was the true ending, I would believe it.
Overall, if you want a great story (Especially if you like Shinji x Asuka), then read this now.