So we have the same idea as all other Post-alternative stories, Takeru returning to the past to save his loved ones all good, and follows canon quite well up until the Sadogashima campaign but has started to go down hill since. The relationships between the characters is good and gives each member some time in the lime light (not that lime), however many critical research failures abound considering Paul is very good at research, mixing cast members that shouldn't even be enlisted (Tatsunami is enlisted here but should only be about 12/13 just one example) and getting the dead people as LI grates (captain Isumis LI is alive in alt, but is dead here, yet Mitsuki's is still alive). Takeru however is now broken very much a Gary Stu but his brain has fallen out somewhere between worlds along with his balls. However if you want a good paced story with a dopy superman hero and tons of UST that will go nowhere based on current Takerus cluelessness and now he can regenerate limbs. for stars out of 10 first 50 chapters 9/10 since then 3/10 currently averaging 5/10.
A good fic but loosing sight of itself
So we have the same idea as all other Post-alternative stories, Takeru returning to the past to save his loved ones all good, and follows canon quite well up until the Sadogashima campaign but has started to go down hill since. The relationships between the characters is good and gives each member some time in the lime light (not that lime), however many critical research failures abound considering Paul is very good at research, mixing cast members that shouldn't even be enlisted (Tatsunami is enlisted here but should only be about 12/13 just one example) and getting the dead people as LI grates (captain Isumis LI is alive in alt, but is dead here, yet Mitsuki's is still alive). Takeru however is now broken very much a Gary Stu but his brain has fallen out somewhere between worlds along with his balls. However if you want a good paced story with a dopy superman hero and tons of UST that will go nowhere based on current Takerus cluelessness and now he can regenerate limbs. for stars out of 10 first 50 chapters 9/10 since then 3/10 currently averaging 5/10.