Opening discussion.
This page may require cleaning. Sadly, I don't think I'll be able to do it myself currently (i'm on the phone and the page is pretty long), so, I will enlist what I consider could use some improvement:
- Bunch of tropes enlisted in one alone, instead of them being separated. (Video Game Cruelty Punishment is listed along with Big Damn Heroes.)
- Some of the explanations include questions and word cruft.
- Alphabetically disordered, unlike most pages.
- Some of the examples could use video links, especially those that might not be easily spotted on a regular gameplay (like the jumpscare that they claim appears when you attempt a Solo route without Black Rings and wait at the character selection screen.)
- Grammar and spelling mistakes here and there.
If you could fix this, I would be very thankful.
Edited by PixilateSpadesBut I did not give it importance.
Opening discussion. This page may require cleaning. Sadly, I don't think I'll be able to do it myself currently (i'm on the phone and the page is pretty long), so, I will enlist what I consider could use some improvement: - Bunch of tropes enlisted in one alone, instead of them being separated. (Video Game Cruelty Punishment is listed along with Big Damn Heroes.) - Some of the explanations include questions and word cruft. - Alphabetically disordered, unlike most pages. - Some of the examples could use video links, especially those that might not be easily spotted on a regular gameplay (like the jumpscare that they claim appears when you attempt a Solo route without Black Rings and wait at the character selection screen.) - Grammar and spelling mistakes here and there. If you could fix this, I would be very thankful.
Edited by PixilateSpades But I did not give it importance.