Okay, I'm not the one who put this page on the Needs a Better Description page, but I can see why whoever did decided to.
The first paragraph is alright, the last line is a bit awkward, but not zap-worthy, in my opinion.
The second and third paragraphs need to get gone. Everything in there is way to focused on the reception and production of the games. I'll move all of the information to a new, probably short, analysis page and replace it all with a more neutral plot description and probably something related to Pico's school to add some kind of length.
Since there is literally no discussion here, I won't bother waiting and just do it.
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Okay, I'm done. I'll keep this page on the NWM page for a while in case anyone can improve what I've done. I am, by no means, that great at this.
Can someone put a transcript of RS4's epilogue on the quotes page? If what snippets I've seen referenced on the page are anything to go by, it's quite trope-heavy and amusing. I'd do the honors myself, but I can't bear to touch that installment again.
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