NNinja
Since: Sep, 2015
Dec 2nd 2017 at 3:03:03 PM
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"it can easily come off as if she's just really really stoned and looking at Frodo like an extra-large bag of Cheetos."
Is it just me or is this decription more Narmy that the scene being described?
According to the Narm Clean-Up thread, this example could use a rewrite to be less complainy:
and this example needs to cite a specific moment: