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AnoBakaDesu Since: Oct, 2013
Apr 5th 2021 at 1:45:56 PM •••

The following:

  • Stop Being Stereotypical: Her uncle Ivan isn't too pleased when he learns that Hibiki and co. were expecting him to greet them in the same outlandish fashion (read: cossack dancing, eating pirozhki, saying "Хорошо") as Gina, and spends a great deal of his appearance admonishing her for tainting the great image of Mother Russia.

Got trimmed for no reason by PF, excising the important part of stereotypical and disrupting the flow of the sentence by deleting "of his appearance", turning the section into a nonsensical "and he spends a great deal admonishing". "A great deal" of what?

I'm expecting PF to come here and explain themselves.

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PF Since: Nov, 2012
Apr 5th 2021 at 3:40:49 PM •••

It was trimmed because the way it was written felt unnecessary. Additionally, saying "of his appearance" is not too helpful because it does not really explain when and where Gina's uncle has this exchange with her. I think mentioning that this happens when the group visits Russia will help explain why him being annoyed with her antics is understandable.

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