AnoBakaDesu
Since: Oct, 2013
Sep 29th 2022 at 2:12:29 PM
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On the Witness:
- You Have Failed Me: Not afraid to pull this on even its highest lieutenants, and its from them that the Darkness has gained this reputation in general. Thus far, recipients of its wrath have been Rhulk, Eramis, Savathun, and (implicitly) Nezarec. It is implied that, aside from stroking his own ego, Calus was attempting his ascension to avoid their wrath.
ehelton8, if you are familiar with How to Write an Example, know that "does this" is a red flag for lazy trope writing, even with the listing.
You have added the entry twice, which is grounds for Edit War even with the slightly tweaked wording since it's still very much a Zero-Context Example.
Edited by AnoBakaDesu "They played us like a DAMN FIDDLE!" — Kazuhira Miller, Metal Gear Solid V: The Phantom Pain Hide / Show Replies
ehelton8
Since: Feb, 2022
This might just be inconsistent writing but about the When You Coming Home, Dad? entry for Calus. The Cabal Booklet openly states Calus would go out in public and end his route with private visits to Iska where they'd have chats. This is a daily occurrence and therefore is Caiatl not allowed to see him in this time?