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\'\'That\'\' isn\'t quite what he said, either (according to the Mangastream translation). He said Haschwalth can\'t absorb Reishi \
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\\\'\\\'That\\\'\\\' isn\\\'t quite what he said, either (according to the Mangastream translation). He said Haschwalth can\\\'t absorb Reishi \\\"around [him] and make it his own power\\\". He never said anything about Haschwalth not being able to take away the reishi or spiritual powers of others, and the last part about \\\"making it his own power\\\" is \\\'\\\'very\\\'\\\' specific wording. However, I suppose that the latter \\\'\\\'could\\\'\\\' be inferred from the former, but since this disagreement is about making the most absolutely accurate and thorough entry possible, I\\\'d leave out the inference.
Other than that, the rewrite is fine. Especially since we have no idea how Haschwalth\\\'s powers have developed in the intervening years.
Other than that, the rewrite is fine. Especially since we have no idea how Haschwalth\\\'s powers have developed in the intervening years.
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\'\'That\'\' isn\'t quite what he said, either (according to the Mangastream translation). He said Haschwalth can\'t absorb Reishi \
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\\\'\\\'That\\\'\\\' isn\\\'t quite what he said, either (according to the Mangastream translation). He said Haschwalth can\\\'t absorb Reishi \\\"around you\\\". He never said anything about Haschwalth not being able to take away the reishi or spiritual powers of others. However, I suppose that the latter \\\'\\\'could\\\'\\\' be inferred from the former, but since this disagreement is about making the most absolutely accurate and thorough entry possible, I\\\'d leave out the inference.
Other than that, the rewrite is fine. Especially since we have no idea how Haschwalth\\\'s powers have developed in the intervening years.
Other than that, the rewrite is fine. Especially since we have no idea how Haschwalth\\\'s powers have developed in the intervening years.
