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Clarel maintains her trust in a Tevinter blood mage, despite the increasingly suspicious behaviour of both him and the Wardens he\'d been \
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Clarel maintains her trust in a Tevinter blood mage, despite the increasingly suspicious/violent behaviour of both him and the Wardens he\\\'d been \\\"helping\\\", until he summons a dragon to kill her.
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Too much detail. It\'s not a summary.
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Too much detail. We\\\'re trying to explain why the example fits, not summarise the game for newbies. Keep the two things that won\\\'t change no matter how you characterise anybody.
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Clarel maintains her trust in a Tevinter blood mage, despite the increasingly suspicious behaviour of both him and the Wardens he\'d been \
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Clarel maintains her trust in a Tevinter blood mage, despite the increasingly suspicious behaviour of both him and the Wardens he\\\'d been \\\"helping\\\", until he summons a dragon to kill her.
