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Besides, what makes you think Zuko\\\'s a bully? He\\\'s completely willing to live and let live, given the opportunity, people follow him because he wants to, and, in chapter 35, when he\\\'s meeting with Kuei, this is his reaction: \\\"I am standing on Earth Kingdom land,\\\" Zuko said, just as blunt. \\\"But the Fire Nation, is the people.\\\" Deadlock, your majesty. We\\\'re going to start this on equal terms if I have to drag you there kicking and screaming.
Quiet. Green eyes met gold, gazes pushing...
I can take him. I\\\'m stronger, more experienced-
I\\\'m... out of my mind. I don\\\'t want this city, damn it!
It was hard to push back the fire. To hold at bay the water that said these people were his tribe, and anything that threatened them had to die.
Kuei is not a threat. Breathe.\\\" A bully would have spiritually overpowered Kuei, taken the city, and then the spirits would have ripped him to shreds. Instead he stood firm to his principles but was civil and polite. Zuko had no way of knowing that Kuei was a spirit healer and was thus stronger than he appeared.
EDIT: If I were to create a livejournal community to discuss this fic, so we can concentrate on actual discussion instead of haters, would people join it?
Quiet. Green eyes met gold, gazes pushing...
I can take him. I\\\'m stronger, more experienced-
I\\\'m... out of my mind. I don\\\'t want this city, damn it!
It was hard to push back the fire. To hold at bay the water that said these people were his tribe, and anything that threatened them had to die.
Kuei is not a threat. Breathe.\\\" A bully would have spiritually overpowered Kuei, taken the city, and then the spirits would have ripped him to shreds. Instead he stood firm to his principles but was civil and polite. Zuko had no way of knowing that Kuei was a spirit healer and was thus stronger than he appeared.
EDIT: If I were to create a livejournal community to discuss this fic, so we can concentrate on actual discussion instead of haters, would people join it?
