[004]
Shimmer712
Current Version
Changed line(s) 2 from:
n
\
to:
\\\"Something sinuous slipped through the waves.
That... can\\\'t be as big as it looks.
Except that red-spider-thing that had gone after Toph had been plenty big, and Hei Bai had been even bigger, and... oh, frost it.\\\"
So it wasn\\\'t a spider thing.
But we know Makoto has been described as sinous. And we know she has water spirits under her control. I\\\'m betting it\\\'s her.
So, Zuko told Katara there was something in the ocean. He\\\'s now in that ocean and when Katara has time to think about it, she\\\'s going to be the first to realize exactly how much danger he\\\'s in, especially since she saw him waterbend.
That... can\\\'t be as big as it looks.
Except that red-spider-thing that had gone after Toph had been plenty big, and Hei Bai had been even bigger, and... oh, frost it.\\\"
So it wasn\\\'t a spider thing.
But we know Makoto has been described as sinous. And we know she has water spirits under her control. I\\\'m betting it\\\'s her.
So, Zuko told Katara there was something in the ocean. He\\\'s now in that ocean and when Katara has time to think about it, she\\\'s going to be the first to realize exactly how much danger he\\\'s in, especially since she saw him waterbend.
Changed line(s) 1 from:
n
blackflamerose, it was a red spider thing Sokka saw. The quote goes:
\
\
to:
blackflamerose, it wasn\\\'t a red spider thing Sokka saw. The quote goes:
\\\"Something sinuous slipped through the waves.
That... can\\\'t be as big as it looks.
Except that red-spider-thing that had gone after Toph had been plenty big, and Hei Bai had been even bigger, and... oh, frost it.\\\"
So it wasn\\\'t a spider thing.
But we know Makoto has been desribed as sinous. And we know she has water spirits under her control. I\\\'m betting it\\\'s her.
So, Zuko told Katara there was something in the ocean. He\\\'s now in that ocean and when Katara has time to think about it, she\\\'s going to be the first to realize exactly how much danger he\\\'s in, especially since she saw him waterbend.
\\\"Something sinuous slipped through the waves.
That... can\\\'t be as big as it looks.
Except that red-spider-thing that had gone after Toph had been plenty big, and Hei Bai had been even bigger, and... oh, frost it.\\\"
So it wasn\\\'t a spider thing.
But we know Makoto has been desribed as sinous. And we know she has water spirits under her control. I\\\'m betting it\\\'s her.
So, Zuko told Katara there was something in the ocean. He\\\'s now in that ocean and when Katara has time to think about it, she\\\'s going to be the first to realize exactly how much danger he\\\'s in, especially since she saw him waterbend.
Changed line(s) 2 from:
n
\
to:
\\\"Something sinuous slipped through the waves.
That... can\\\'t be as big as it looks.
Except that red-spider-thing that had gone after Toph had been plenty big, and Hei Bai had been even bigger, and... oh, frost it.\\\"
So it wasn\\\'t a spider thing.
But we know Makoto has been desribed as sinous. And we know she has water spirits under her control. I\\\'m betting it\\\'s her.
So, Zuko told Katara there was something in the ocean. He\\\'s now in that ocean and when Katara has time to think about it, she\\\'s going to be the first to realize exactly how much danger he\\\'s in, especially since she saw him waterbend.
That... can\\\'t be as big as it looks.
Except that red-spider-thing that had gone after Toph had been plenty big, and Hei Bai had been even bigger, and... oh, frost it.\\\"
So it wasn\\\'t a spider thing.
But we know Makoto has been desribed as sinous. And we know she has water spirits under her control. I\\\'m betting it\\\'s her.
So, Zuko told Katara there was something in the ocean. He\\\'s now in that ocean and when Katara has time to think about it, she\\\'s going to be the first to realize exactly how much danger he\\\'s in, especially since she saw him waterbend.
Changed line(s) 3 from:
n
So both assassinations are done out of pure motives: to protect innocents from an external threat. And yet, no one condemns the Valdemarians (despite the fact that Hulda, at least, was fleeing back to the Eastern Empire and presented zero continued threat to Valdemar or anyone else when Elspeth -- who happened to have a deeply personal reason to want Hulda dead, considering the abuse she suffered at the woman\'s hands as a child -- hunted her down and killed not only her, but the Eastern Empire diplomat (who had done nothing but try to save Hulda) too. On the other hand, Tremaine sent his orders with no malice (he freely admits that he doesn\'t know the individuals he ordered attacked, only their positions), and yet is condemned for his actions sufficiently that Solaris feels it necessary to curse him before accepting his alliance.
to:
So both assassinations are done out of pure motives: to protect innocents from an external threat. And yet, no one condemns the Valdemarians, despite the fact that Hulda, at least, was fleeing back to the Eastern Empire and presented zero continued threat to Valdemar or anyone else when Elspeth -- who happened to have a deeply personal reason to want Hulda dead, considering the abuse she suffered at the woman\\\'s hands as a child -- hunted her down and killed not only her, but the Eastern Empire diplomat (who had done nothing but try to save Hulda) too. On the other hand, Tremaine sent his orders with no malice (he freely admits that he doesn\\\'t know the individuals he ordered attacked, only their positions), and yet is condemned for his actions sufficiently that Solaris feels it necessary to curse him before accepting his alliance.
