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This is somewhat of an overhostile description. It is true that the relationship got discredited because it was used by ThoseWackyNazis. However through most of history most of government was a Russian-doll like structure from the king or the emperor down to small clans, feudal overlords, or merchant cities in most parts of the world and whether it was a benevolent, sinister, or just neutral arrangement would vary.
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The original was somewhat of an overhostile description. It is true that the relationship got discredited because it was used by ThoseWackyNazis. However through most of history most of government was a Russian-doll like structure from the king or the emperor down to small clans, feudal overlords, or merchant cities in most parts of the world and whether it was a benevolent, sinister, or just neutral arrangement would vary. At the least the term \\\"puppet\\\" has nazi like connotations and \\\"vassal\\\" would serve just as well.
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{{Bavarian Fire Drill}}
{{Xanatos Gambit}}
{{Last Second Chance}}
{{Dare to Be Badass}}
{{Xanatos Gambit}}
{{Last Second Chance}}
{{Dare to Be Badass}}
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{{Bavarian Fire Drill}}; {{Xanatos Gambit}}; {{Last Second Chance}}; {{Dare to Be Badass}}
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{{Last-Second Chance}}
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{{Last Second Chance}}
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None of those really capture his specific talent, though. The battle\'s already won, he\'s just letting you know. If anything, it needs a new category: \
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None of those really capture his specific talent, though. The battle\\\'s already won, he\\\'s just letting you know. If anything, it needs a new category: {{Check and Mate}}.