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The main problem I see is that it waffles around its own points so much that it ends up going in a full circle and not saying much of anything. It can almost be summarized as \
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The main problem I see is that it circles around its own points so much that it ends up not saying much of anything. It can be summarized as \\\"Europeans might seem to develop faster, but that\\\'s just historical coincidence so ignore this entry\\\". Since Europe and the rest of the world aren\\\'t mentioned anywhere else and the trope only concerns itself with humanity\\\'s relationship to other species, it\\\'s just not relevant.
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How about it\'s an irrelevant wall of text that waffles around its own points so much that it\'s ultimately not saying anything at all? Seriously, the short version of it is \
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The main problem I see is that it waffles around its own points so much that it ends up going in a full circle and not saying much of anything. It can almost be summarized as \\\"Europeans might seem to develop faster, but that\\\'s just historical coincidence so ignore this entry\\\". Since Europe and the rest of the world aren\\\'t mentioned anywhere else on the page and the trope only concerns itself with humanity\\\'s relationship to other species, it\\\'s just not relevant.
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How about it\'s an irrelevant wall of text that waffles around its own points so much that it\'s ultimately not saying anything at all? Seriously, the short version of it is \
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How about it\\\'s an irrelevant wall of text that waffles around its own points so much that it\\\'s ultimately not saying anything at all? Seriously, the short version of it is \\\"Europeans might seem to develop faster, but that\\\'s just historical coincidence so ignore this entry\\\". Nobody brought up European cultural development, the trope is not about European cultural development, so devoting a whole paragraph to discrediting a claim that nobody even made in the first place really comes across as hostile, overly defensive and, more to the point, irrelevant. This is about human development as compared to \\\'\\\'aliens\\\'\\\'. Until we discover aliens, or unless somebody wants to compare our development to chimps, dolphins and other non-human species, it\\\'s not this trope.
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How about it\'s an irrelevant wall of text that waffles around its own points so much that it\'s ultimately not saying anything at all? Seriously, the short version of it is \
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How about it\\\'s an irrelevant wall of text that waffles around its own points so much that it\\\'s ultimately not saying anything at all? Seriously, the short version of it is \\\"Europeans might seem to develop faster, but that\\\'s just historical coincidence so ignore this entry\\\". Nobody brought up European cultural development, the trope is not about European cultural development, so devoting a whole paragraph to discrediting a claim that nobody even made in the first place really comes across as hostile, overly defensive and, more to the point, irrelevant. This is about human development as compared to \\\'\\\'aliens\\\'\\\'. Until we discover aliens, or unless somebody wants to compare our development to chimps, dolphins and other nun-human species, it\\\'s not about this trope.
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How about it\'s an irrelevant wall of text that waffles around its own points? Nobody brought up European cultural development, the trope is not about European cultural development, so devoting a whole paragraph to debunking a claim nobody even made in the first place really comes across as hostile, overly defensive and, more to the point, irrelevant. This is about human development as compared to \'\'aliens\'\'. Until we discover aliens, or unless somebody wants to compare our development to chimps, dolphins and other nun-human species, it\'s not relevant.
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How about it\\\'s an irrelevant wall of text that waffles around its own points so much that it\\\'s ultimately not saying anything at all? Seriously, the short version of it is \\\"Europeans might seem to develop faster, but that\\\'s just historical coincidence so ignore that\\\". Nobody brought up European cultural development, the trope is not about European cultural development, so devoting a whole paragraph to discrediting a claim that nobody even made in the first place really comes across as hostile, overly defensive and, more to the point, irrelevant. This is about human development as compared to \\\'\\\'aliens\\\'\\\'. Until we discover aliens, or unless somebody wants to compare our development to chimps, dolphins and other nun-human species, it\\\'s not about this trope.
