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Good article overall but it seems to me the last two sentences are more relevant to commonplaces than to anything demonstrated by serious studies. Could skip on the sugar coat.
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Good article overall but it seems to me the last two sentences are more relevant to commonplaces than to anything demonstrated by serious studies. Could skip on the sugar coating.
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Good article overall but it seems to me the last ywo sentences are more relevant to commonplaces than to anything demonstrated by serious studies. Could skip on the sugar coat.
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Good article overall but it seems to me the last two sentences are more relevant to commonplaces than to anything demonstrated by serious studies. Could skip on the sugar coat.
