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1)As is discussed further down the examples, Anne is not universally considered a beauty in the context of the novel. In that time and place red hair and a tall, thin figure would\'ve been considered actual physical \'\'flaws\'\'.
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1)As is discussed further down the examples, Anne is not universally considered a beauty in the context of the novel. In that time and place red hair and a tall, thin figure would\\\'ve more often been considered actual physical \\\'\\\'flaws\\\'\\\'.
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1) Anne is not at all universally considered a beauty in the context of the novel. In which time and place red hair and a tall, thin figure are actual serious physical flaws.
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1)As is discussed further down the examples, Anne is not universally considered a beauty in the context of the novel. In that time and place red hair and a tall, thin figure would\\\'ve been considered actual physical \\\'\\\'flaws\\\'\\\'.
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Removed this from the MarySue example. Rebutting in some detail, as this is something that comes up a lot in these pages:
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3)\'\'spends several years being pursued by a guy to whom she has never said a nice word then realises that she IS in love with him after all;\'\'
Nope. There\'s a long period of good friendship in between those two extremes.
Nope. There\'s a long period of good friendship in between those two extremes.
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3)\\\'\\\'spends several years being pursued by a guy to whom she has never said a nice word then realises that she IS in love with him after all;\\\'\\\' Nope. There\\\'s a long period of good friendship in between those two extremes.
