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HarleyQuinnhyenaholic
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I mean, anybody can read a few lines of lousy porn, or write a crappy sex scene, but it takes a real PRO to make it through 21k of orc, goblin and warg sex.
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I mean, anybody can read a few lines of lousy porn, or write a crappy sex scene, but it takes a real PRO to make it through 21k of orc, goblin and warg sex. My biggest deal was that when I was reading it, half of the time I wasn\\\'t even going \\\'ew\\\'. I was constantly looking at the scroll bar and thinking, \\\"What? Not even half-way through?\\\"
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We need to link to Celebrian. Or at least mention it. When a fanfic is so bad - and not just because of squick or bad writing, but also incredibly BORING - that it\'s considered a badge of honour to manage to read through it, you know it\'s that bad.
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We need to link to Celebrian. Or at least mention it. When a fanfic is so bad - and not just because of squick or bad writing, but also incredibly BORING - that it\\\'s considered a badge of honour to manage to read through the whole thing, you know it\\\'s that bad.
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I mean, the worst part is that the writer seemed to think that to make a story entertaining, all you have to do is add porn to balance out boringness.
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I mean, the worst part is that the writer seemed to think that to make a story entertaining, all you have to do is add porn to balance out boringness. And the word \\\'lavender\\\'.
