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EDIT: You know, devoid of any further context, the example as-written seems more like an example for motorcycle-riding, rather than bicycling. You have one character turning his nose up at an activity literally anyone can do and insisting people partake in a more expensive hobby.
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\\\"Inadequate Inheritor: Haven doesn\\\'t want Pipp to succeed her as queen because she unnecessarily livestreams everything.\\\"
I don\\\'t think that\\\'s accurate. First, Zip is older sister and if Zephyr Heights is like most monarchies, her seniority is the reason she is the heir to the throne.
Secondly, Haven in that scene didn\\\'t say anything about why Pip can\\\'t be the future queen. She only pointed out why her moving away from Maretime Bay would be more difficult, as Pip has her own business there. Haven only speaks about Pip\\\'s live-streaming in the context of not having to worry about her safety so much (because while Zip won\\\'t be there to keep aye on her sister, Pip live-streaming habit can let the Queen know whether she is in any danger or not).
I don\\\'t think that\\\'s accurate. First, Zip is older sister and if Zephyr Heights is like most monarchies, her seniority is the reason she is the heir to the throne.
Secondly, Haven in that scene didn\\\'t say anything about why Pip can\\\'t be the future queen. She only pointed out why her moving away from Maretime Bay would be more difficult, as Pip has her own business there. Haven only speaks about Pip\\\'s live-streaming in the context of not having to worry about her safety so much (because while Zip won\\\'t be there to keep aye on her sister, Pip live-streaming habit can let the Queen know whether she is in any danger or not).
