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[004] SenorCornholio Current Version

20th Aug '23 at 02:17:23 PM

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** The problem ponies (or humans, depending on the story) are wholly convinced that there\'s nothing wrong with their way of life, no matter how problematic it would be in the long run. When told otherwise, they coldly and loudly dismiss their worries the first time, then turn angry and spiteful after a repeat offense. Sometimes, the result tends to be violent, especially when Twilight \

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** The problem ponies (or humans, depending on the story) are wholly convinced that there\\\'s nothing wrong with their way of life, no matter how problematic it would be in the long run. When told otherwise, they coldly and loudly dismiss their worries the first time, then turn angry and spiteful after a repeat offense. Sometimes, the result tends to be violent, especially when Twilight \\\"fixes\\\" the problem behind the character\\\'s back.
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How was that? I tried to be as impartial as possible here, so I hope that helps.

[003] SenorCornholio

19th Aug '23 at 11:25:58 AM

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I haven\'t seen an instance where an entire page had to be scrapped and done anew, but we \'\'can\'\' re-word the page so it doesn\'t come across as a constant jab-fest. For instance, the example you described can be redone as such:\\\\

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I haven\\\'t seen an instance where an entire page had to be scrapped and done anew, but we \\\'\\\'can\\\'\\\' re-word the page so it doesn\\\'t come across as a constant jab-fest. For instance, the example you described can be redone as such:

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** The problem ponies (or humans, depending on the story) are wholly convinced that there\'s nothing wrong with their way of life, no matter how problematic it would be in the long run. When told otherwise, they coldly and loudly dismiss their worries the first time, then turn angry and spiteful after a repeat offense. Sometimes, the result tends to be violent, especially when Twilight \

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** The problem ponies (or humans, depending on the story) are wholly convinced that there\\\'s nothing wrong with their way of life, no matter how problematic it would be in the long run. When told otherwise, they coldly and loudly dismiss their worries the first time, then turn angry and spiteful after a repeat offense. Sometimes, the result tends to be violent, especially when Twilight \\\"fixes\\\" the problem behind the character\\\'s back.
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How was that? I tried to be as impartial as possible here, so I hope that helps.

[002] SenorCornholio

19th Aug '23 at 11:25:43 AM

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** The problem ponies (or humans, depending on the story) are wholly convinced that there\'s nothing wrong with their way of life, no matter how problematic it would be in the long run. When told otherwise, they coldly and loudly dismiss their worries the first time, then turn angry and spiteful after a repeat offense. Sometimes, the result tends to be violent, especially when Twilight \

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** The problem ponies (or humans, depending on the story) are wholly convinced that there\\\'s nothing wrong with their way of life, no matter how problematic it would be in the long run. When told otherwise, they coldly and loudly dismiss their worries the first time, then turn angry and spiteful after a repeat offense. Sometimes, the result tends to be violent, especially when Twilight \\\"fixes\\\" the problem behind the character\\\'s back.
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How was that? I tried to be as impartial as possible here, so I hope that helps.

[001] Gemser

23rd Jan '22 at 02:59:24 AM

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I opt for tropes like DiggingToChina, CrazyPrepared or StillFightingTheCivilWar because I believe I have seen them in absurd contexts. Any more ideas?

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I opt for keeping tropes like DiggingToChina, CrazyPrepared or StillFightingTheCivilWar because I believe I have seen them in absurd contexts. Any more ideas?

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